Dad plz here me out

by hm   Aug 20, 2005


I cant help sliting my wrist
i hope it was worth all theses time u hit me with Ur fiest
i wish u could understand how i felt
instead of u taking your anger out on me by hitting me with Ur belt
i wish my Lyf mad sence
so i wouldn't go home every night feeling so scared and tense
i wish i should live a normal life
instead of turning 2 my knife
i dint get dad what u have done 2 me in the past
and how u think i can just 4get it so fast
i wish i could show u all the actions u have done
so u would get y i always think about this gun
but i no my life will continue the same
with on going pain
because im locked up in this cage
no key just millons of chains

this is a poem i wrote about my dad hopefully same one feel the same plz comment

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  • 18 years ago

    by Robie Lincer

    That was a very sad poem!!!

    i have the same feeling too,,, its horible!!!

    but always keep ur head up!

  • 18 years ago

    by SexyBabe101

    Nice poem! it all rymed and it was really good.
    i kinda feel the same way as you,
    my dad said he was gunna kill me and my mum (obviously didnt happen) anyway i loved your poem! also thanks for commenting on my poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    O wow where i wrote the LOVE this poem the O was supposed to turn out as a heart like in my name but it didnt work haha sorry it looks dumb now but w/e =P

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Really good.. my dads a jerk too but not in the same way.. his issue was alcahol.. so im sure u have it worse.. soo sorry about that.. hope things get better.. anywho.. i L♥OVE this poem!! it rocks flip flops! keep it up

  • 19 years ago

    by Ashes of a Black Rose aka Night Child

    Wow, you write so well! im enveous...

    read some of mine myb?

    ash

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