Wow, you write so well! im enveous...

read some of mine myb?

ash

Really good.. my dads a jerk too but not in the same way.. his issue was alcahol.. so im sure u have it worse.. soo sorry about that.. hope things get better.. anywho.. i L♥OVE this poem!! it rocks flip flops! keep it up

O wow where i wrote the LOVE this poem the O was supposed to turn out as a heart like in my name but it didnt work haha sorry it looks dumb now but w/e =P

Nice poem! it all rymed and it was really good.
i kinda feel the same way as you,
my dad said he was gunna kill me and my mum (obviously didnt happen) anyway i loved your poem! also thanks for commenting on my poems.

That was a very sad poem!!!

i have the same feeling too,,, its horible!!!

but always keep ur head up!