That poem displays the kind of confusion i often feel. lol. nice job

This is a great poem. you did an excellent job of putting it all togeter. The flow was awsome. It does not tell a straight story, but you can tell that there is one there. It just takes a deeper sense of meaning and it makes poetry much more intresting to read. Keep up the good work. Dont stop writing.

Hey so far all your poems i have liked, so i cant wait till your next 1! if u got msn email me ali_hooper@hotmail.com! x