Wow...that poem is great..the writing, but yet sad. Keep writing your talented. --linn

Thats such a good poem. ur a gr8 writer

Aww dis is so sad but sweet though... if its ture i'm really sori
Take care... xoxox
luv dia

Omg its so sad/ its very good. u are good at poetry, this is a very realistic poem... really good **adds u to fav.***

I fell in love with this poem. You have a beautiful mind. Keep doin what you doin.

Damm big bro
That poem is uhh real deep
and real and that's what makes it so good
I envy your style of writing and how you can describe the most sad and depressing things but twist them into n uplifting spirit
its amazing how you can share all you feel on paper n not say a word
kee pit up babe
dont ever lose it
or ill kill yu

What Ia sad story. I hope everything works out for you!

How sad this is, I am so glad you have each other to lean on Great job telling this. Thinking of you and keeping you in my prayers.

Aww Baby .. my favorit one
i love yu so muchh and yur
little sister twoo .. im going
to corrupt her lol

Hey David i almost did not comment on this poem, i felt sort of like an intruder on your lives as i read this sad and melancholy poem.
I wasn't to crazy about the layout of the poem, i prefer each sentance on it's own but thats a personal thing , other than that very well written

Grant