I must admit I've never read anything like this...I suppose the twist of black comedy makes it worth reading...I liked it, but honestly, I'm not sure why.

--christa//no motiv?

This has to be the most unique poem I have ever read. It actually had me laughing! It’s dark in its own way, but still hold some humor. The wig part made me laugh, I had an attorney once that wore a wig, and it was so noticeable the thing had a greenish tint to it. That was years ago, when I found myself in trouble more often than I would have liked. Anyways, good job! Take Care! Brooke~

Ha ha ha! i love this one and the last one i read! your really good at this poetry style, it's in dark poems but i was smiling and laughing at parts all over! very well done!.

~Jacklyn

OMG! that made me smile.. very different in a very good way! 5/5

This poems is great it's a dark poem but different from other ones i've read.... 5/5

Very unique. Dark in a way but funny in another. I really liked it though! 5/5

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

LOL!!!!!!!!! OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!! great job hun! u do have talent! terrific!!!
take care of you
amanda

LOL!!!!!!!!! OMG I LOVE THIS POEM!!! great job hun! u do have talent! terrific!!!
take care of you
amanda

Its another brilliant poem. (Someone please give me another way of saying that!) I think it sounded like one of those dreams where you're never sure if it's real or not and you do something you regret so much, then you wake up and you still regret it. I'm always standing by you.

Luv Scarlet xxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

This was a different type of poem to what i usually read. It is definately in the correct category! it was brilliant and different :)

I began dreaming that my legs were made of feet
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As does the tattoo of the Simpson's remain on my behind
that's good!
not bad, sorry, i hafta go, i'll do the other two when i can, this was cute, good job! 4/5

Very good, crazy, wild, beautiful... no one could ever reproduce a poem near that, it had a twist of something that made it unique...the words combined made it good, brilliant....i really like it mate.....keep writing stuff like this

So cool. Jeez, you have a mind.

This was creepy and strangely funny at the same time. I liked it, but it is hard to say why, still a good poem either way!

-Mikochan

This is so strange! i mean i loved it, it's like a dark poem but you can't help but laugh when you read it. keep it up, woh totally unique!

This is funny and dark and its not like anything ive ever read. amazing!

This poem's realy different!

It's funny but not stupid

I like it

Imi

One of the most unique poems I've read on this site. Kind of dark but yet had some comic attitude with it.

Your poems go way beyond thoughts. they show something so utterly unbelievable, something my poems never seem to have. great write.
love Tara-Kay
xxxxx

I loved the poem!!!!!
it was great !!!!!!!!!!!
-Abbey