While I..

by katie!   Aug 20, 2005


I woke up in the middle of the morning last night
I discovered my wings had left me and walked into flight
I looked everywhere for them as I watched them fly
I was laughing and smiling while I gouged out my eyes

Trusting nobody I put my trust into my friend
At the beginning of the road I was at the very end
I smiled and joined in the laughter and fun
Whilst shooting my kneecaps with my favourite gun

I walked through the kitchen while running in my bed
Having lost my wings I attached them to my head
Blood spattered gently such a lovely sound
It was so very funny when my severed hand was found

I chatted to the waitress whilst becoming a mute
Declaring my hate for music whilst playing a gold flute
I ate like a horse completing my starvation these days
Wasn't it good humour when I slashed my stomach away

I jumped on a trampoline when I was strapped to the floor
With my wings I flew out the window walked through the door
I smiled and I played having the best day of my life
As I stabbed myself repeatedly with that blasted knife

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  • 19 years ago

    by gasping for air

    Its good... its a lil weird... but i cant tell you have some sort of talent there.. keep up the good work
    take care of you
    amanda

  • 19 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Mmmmm....this is VERY dark. It was pretty good though. The rhyming seemed forced in some places but otherwise great job. i give it a 4/5.

    Much Love
    ~*hAilY*~

  • 19 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    This was definetly worth reading. A good break from the typical style on this site. Great poem
    Sarahxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Stacinator

    Wow! very unique!! i love it and you get a 5. I agree with both weeping wolf and jacklyn! very amazing.

  • 19 years ago

    by Weeping Wolf

    Whoa i've never seen/read a poem like this before! It was real spooky but made me laugh a lil, it was awesome u should write more like that!