by katie! Aug 20, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
unexplained
I woke up in the middle of the morning last night |
Its good... its a lil weird... but i cant tell you have some sort of talent there.. keep up the good work |
Mmmmm....this is VERY dark. It was pretty good though. The rhyming seemed forced in some places but otherwise great job. i give it a 4/5. |
by Tiny Reader
This was definetly worth reading. A good break from the typical style on this site. Great poem |
by Stacinator
Wow! very unique!! i love it and you get a 5. I agree with both weeping wolf and jacklyn! very amazing. |
by Weeping Wolf
Whoa i've never seen/read a poem like this before! It was real spooky but made me laugh a lil, it was awesome u should write more like that! |