Aww i love it:) Well whoever u hurt, im sure she'll have to forgive you;) Besides how can anyone resist you haha, good job hun, i look forward to reading more,

Love,
Ana*

I really liked this one!!! wow...
this stanza really got me:
"I know it is impossible to mend the past
The stairs once there, are gone
I feel stranded in the this present place
wishing i could correct what i did wrong."
i guess i can relate o it most.. take care kane..
x x x ..please check out some of mine!?!

KANE!! So sad buddy! I hope that you're okay! It was a great write...I read it twice! : ) May God Bless You and Keep You Always! Amanda

Great poem. The words mean alot. It seems like I have been there more than once. Love the words. They are deep and have alot of meaning. Keep it up!

Reguards,

.:Samara Elizabeth Vance:.