by Kane Burden Aug 20, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
Dark storm clouds hanging over me |
by Mandy Lou
Kane, another great one! I'm sorry if this is true, but it is inspirational! You haven't written in so long! It's good to see some new stuff! |
by Torn
Thatw as great but like ~lost and Alone~...i don't quite understand the story? i like how it's not so obvious though gets you thinking. |
by Ana Vidovic
This poem is so passionate. I love it very much. I love these lines "I creeped into your life, and settled in your mind, Living as an intruder |
by Kristen
Nice poem but its sad if u eva need anything just ask me kk |