Nice poem but its sad if u eva need anything just ask me kk
kristen
plz comment on mine thanks

This poem is so passionate. I love it very much. I love these lines "I creeped into your life, and settled in your mind, Living as an intruder
but without me you remain undefined" brilliant also the last two lines are awesome!

Ana*

Thatw as great but like ~lost and Alone~...i don't quite understand the story? i like how it's not so obvious though gets you thinking.
take care x x x

Kane, another great one! I'm sorry if this is true, but it is inspirational! You haven't written in so long! It's good to see some new stuff!