Incedible! good flow, the ryming scheme was perfect...what else can i do besides give you 5/5??

This poem... its like i could have written it. this is how i feel only i can never write it down on paper.

i hope things get better for you cos i bet ur amazing.

cos i know how sh1t it feels to have to fake being happy.
and i know what its like to feel that the only way out is by using the blade
:0(

great poem tho.

it made me real close to tears. xXxXx

AMAZING POEM! I really love this, it truly says all I wish I could, I know how hard it is to live life controlled by the blade, i hate having to be 'happy', when all I want to do is curl up and self-harm, your poem portrayed this beautifully!

A wonderfull talent you've got!

Love and Hugs
xX MAZ Xx

That was a terrific poem, good job

Always here,
-Razor-

This is amazing!!! you are an awesome poet. I like this a lot. I have experience with that and I love how you expressed it so deeply into this. Keep writing!!!!!

Hey Krystin...thats like my one poem.

Hey love the poem!! i feel likes its about me!! that poem was really good!! The flow was great!! it like got my attention and thats a hard thing to do at times!! great job.. stay strong!! bye bye EJ

Amazing poem... very powerful and really sad! I think alot of people can relate to how you're feeling... i hope things get better for you...and soon!
take care, xoxoxo

WOW! absoluty(sp?) amazing poem. it had great rhyming and you didnt try to force any of it. the way you expressed yourself...awesome!

That was good, though very sad. it's scary to think that one day you may go too far. i wish there was a different alternative. i'm a former kansas resident btw. are you midwestern or KC area?

Its me again.
thanks for your comment... means alot... so i re-read ur poem.

i realy love it n ur a very talented person
goodluck if your still planning on writing a biography (like mine lol) i ll check it out if ya do write one xx

Awesome poem. I know what thats all like. Putting on a mask so people won't freak out and crap.

Eminem101101101@yahoo.com

Great poem

Wooow that's really good!!
5/5!!

Rate and comment some of my poems too xx

Great poem, it could be about me, i know what its like having to put on the "happy face" so people wont have a fit.
5/5!