Awesome job.. its a good start... but i think that if you tweek it a lil and work on the description some along with the wording it'll be even better.. keep at it..
take care of you
amanda

Wow. Just wow. This is like the poem i needed when i broke up with my x a while back.. :P 5/5

This is so true pain is so real keep up the good work 5/5

Very true poem, pain is an incredibly awful feeling, you described the different types of pain well and I enjoyed the way it was written, I'm glad you didnt force any of the poem I thought that was good, it is indeed a very real feeling, well done on this poem
xxxxx

Good poem. Started good but got a little shakey. Still i liked it so 4/5

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

Wow huni i love it its sad but so so true u put great emotion in ur poems

Nicely Written

Some odd grammar but i like it, If only it rhymed :p

Wow again gr8 poems u are pretty good at this