This dark room

by Godoftheblackflame   Aug 20, 2005


I sit here in this lonely room
its dark and cold
i try to find something to hold
but air is all i stumble upon

i try to find you in the darkness of this room
i here your voice so close to me
yet i feel nothing but the cold air pass by me
every time i feel so close you seem to drift away

i call to you
but this darkness drowns my words
i cry my eyes out but u cant see because the dark covers me
i slit my wrists and the blood drives it all away

i lay there in that sea of red
you finally see me away from all this darkness....im sorry i couldnt get u to understand i loved you
and i didnt want it to end this way

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  • 19 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow.. great job, really sad, 5/5

  • 19 years ago

    by NICOLE

    Thank u for reading my poem i hoped you liked it and that was about my best friend my sister but you should keep it up your poems are really good

  • 19 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    Wow touching... i loved it =D

    Stay Strong ^_^

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

  • 19 years ago

    by Stabbylou

    Excellent, love it, keep writing, it's obvious you know and have heart behind what your saying, so keep saying how you feel cause it's f'n good poetry

    -stacey xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by jaki

    Woah... that was so good, i loved the ending the best, great work =)

    *jackie*

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