Addiction

by EJ   Aug 20, 2005


Tired, sleepy
vision blurry
to many drugs
in such a hurry

silence, quiet
never to tell
make a promise
I’ll see you in hell

drugs, addiction
nothing to gain
take some pills
they’ll easy your pain

night, life
just one more fight
get out my knife
I’ll make a sight

fears, tears
one to many years
its taken over
its time to kill

run, hide
locked inside
no time for being kind
your turn to shine

Ok i know its not my best and its not finished but i am just happy to be writting because i have had such horrible writters block i have not known what to do.. tell me what you think.. vote and comment!! thanks

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  • 18 years ago

    by greenmunky

    Excellent. i loved it even if it wasnt finished yet. it was great

  • 19 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Great start. I like the style of this and nice form...tell me when you finish please :)

    "night, life
    just on more fight
    get out my knife
    I’ll make a sight" - *one (more fight)

    "run, hide
    locked inside
    no time to being kind
    your turn to shine" - Shouldn't it be "no time for being kind?"

    Take care.

    xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kendall

    Nice poem, i can relate

  • 19 years ago

    by ButterflyKisses_xo

    YAY THE WRITTERS BLOCK IS OVER! im happy that its over..cuz i love reading your work! by the way this is angel of sweet misery AKA Katie..Just thought ud like to know..anyways..your poem was AWESOME! i really liked it..very well done!

    Stay strong!

    Much Love,
    katie

  • 19 years ago

    by keirstin

    Yo i think thats an excellent poem keep up the the hard work

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