I love this poem it is the greatist i have read I give it a definate 5/5 i wish i was able to give a 100 because that is what this one desirves. Don't change the way you write this one is perfect.

This was pretty good. It flowed well and was very good overall. 5/5

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~*hAiLy*~

One more night of romance
I like this line because you can make your own idea of what happens next in between the lines and can be more then one thing. nice job.
I love this, and when you added the sea into it, normally that would seem out of place, but in this one it was exceptable, I loved it! 5/5

One more night of romance
I like this line because you can make your own idea of what happens next in between the lines and can be more then one thing. nice job.
I love this, and when you added the sea into it, normally that would seem out of place, but in this one it was exceptable, I loved it! 5/5

I enjoyed this poem. normally i have critism, but for this i have nothing. again good work

You're REALLY good look at mine please. but seriously i love your poems.