Issue...

by LKA   Aug 21, 2005


You hurt under every breath you take.
You feel relief when you suffocate.
We don't under stand your pain.
On your sleeve lies a red stain.
But if i help you will you stop?
Can i help you get back on top?
So u can stop.
So you wont fail me 1 last time.Just like you said you wouldn't but you lied.
You said you would quit.
But instead you lit that cigarette.
You took that razor-blade.
I thought you had it made.
But can you stop now,look what it did to you
You acted like this was no issue.
Well now theres nothing i can do.
To help you now,you live underneath the ground.
With roses and tulips,Maybe you just didn't know how beautiful you really were.
Maybe next time you will learn.
This was an issue.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Cynthia--Nasr

    Thats a short and sad one.. !! :S

  • 19 years ago

    by jaki

    Thats really good... one of my bestfriends wants to die, she cuts herself around twice a day, and no one knows why... and it hurts me even more to know that she doesnt trust me, but hey... life sucks
    i hope your poem isnt about anyone... if it is im truely sorry, that must hurt alot... email me if you like

    *jackie*

  • 19 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow this poem is really good, its really sad, you are a very good poet and I thought this poem had a very good flow to it, great job and thanks for the comment too. 5/5