Wow this poem is really good, its really sad, you are a very good poet and I thought this poem had a very good flow to it, great job and thanks for the comment too. 5/5

Thats really good... one of my bestfriends wants to die, she cuts herself around twice a day, and no one knows why... and it hurts me even more to know that she doesnt trust me, but hey... life sucks
i hope your poem isnt about anyone... if it is im truely sorry, that must hurt alot... email me if you like

*jackie*

Thats a short and sad one.. !! :S