Oh jos:(
thats a good song but..can't wait to hear all these when you get back!!
you're better than all this, i just want you to smile.
take care hun x x x

Gr8 song.. i lykd it.. nice rhyme and gud feel.. i never commented on a song b4 so i dunno wat 2 write.. this is the best i cud do (and im reli busy over here) sorry.. but anywayz it was gr8 and i lykd it..
take care

I'd so listen to that song becuase the lyrics are amazing.. good job :)

EKK! I love it! Awesome job! I used to feel that way. About my best friend. Long sad story. But yea, you did an awesome job! It flowed really well. I liked it tons! And thanks for commenting on my poem!

Gr8 song, it was really meaningful (i dont even know if thats a word) well done it was fantastic