Awww...thats great!
The flow was great and i can relate really well :D
Good luck with it :D
This was written really well and I enjoyed readin it, il give it a 5 well done :D

x)

I really enjoy poems that repeat the theme, so this one was good ... night and day ... luved it!

Awww... so sweet! Simple yet a great write! Keep it up! -cheers- ^_^

Thanks for the comment on my poem glad someone enjoyed it. Beautifully written by the way keep up the good worK! =)

5/5

Kay

Wow, that was a great write! I really liked it...the simple words and lines were very effective. Keep up your great work, and thank you for your comment on my poem! 5/5

This is a wonderful poem, i like it alot, and thx for the comments

Nice poem indeed ^-^ keep it up

With your arms around my waist
I could never be more safe

I loved these lines...so romantic!
Very good job on the poem, I could feel the longing in each word.

Take care,

5/5 Ingrid