Good job

That was really good. i never got bored and its not only cause its short. ur a great writer.

Hey there, I just read ur poem and it's great, I mean talking about inner pain, sometimes people dont wanna see what's in front of them, scared of the truth. the inner pain needs to come out smtimes. Keep it up, I loved it.

So true great job keep it up nice subject 5.5

Kinda scary but it definately had a great impact.

Thank you all for your comments i appreciate everything...new poems coming up next month or sooner!!!