Startled Deer. (Than Bauk)

by Steven Beesley   Aug 21, 2005


A startled deer
Full of fear runs
In clear moonlight

Than Bauk:
A short poem of Burmese Origin. It consists of 3 lines with 4 syllables per line. The rhyme is the 4th syllable of the first line, the 3rd syllable of the 2nd line and the 2nd syllable of the 3rd line.

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  • 19 years ago

    by amber

    It is good

  • 19 years ago

    by Strange Angel

    Interesting stlye. i had never heard of this before, i agree with brooke when she says she learns a new style everytime she reads your poetry! reading you vast collection is like a very interesting english lesson. :D

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    How unique, when I think of deer, I think about my grandpa that passed away a few years back. It brings happy memories for me. You have such talent; I learn a new style every time I read your poetry. Take Care! Brooke~

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