I like this because it isn't simply stated. You have to wrap your head around it to truly grasp it, or at least try to grasp it. Nice work, it's difficult to do styled poetry. I think tetracyt's are difficult too.

Wow, this is so...what's the word? It must be getting late cause I can't seem to think. It's so deep, yet.....I'm at a loss!
I'll just say it convey's quite alot in so few words. Not something that's too easily done. Awesome stuff~Holly