I must admit this is a very good poem. The repetition fulfills and excellent purpose. And I am sorry about your grandfather's death. The emotion you show is very powerful and clear. Good job. Nice dition. Keep it up!

Very nice poem. I liked how your split it into two different emotions. It's like a before and after effect. Nice job.

Aww babe i no u have been missing him and this poem shows that its so good! LOve u xxx