Kewl.. nice one i lyk it .
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I'm sorry to hear that you're going to have an operation.... Keep urself strong and we will pray for u ;)

Good luck with the operation, I will be hoping that it all goes well, I'm sure it will, thats a really good poem that shows your anxiety building up to what is happening, good luck once again and take care

Hey i hope everything gose ok. good luck grate poem 5.5

You know what I can really relate to this...I mean really...try not to worry! I'll say a prayer...hope you get a cloth gown instead of the paper one...heh. Nice repetition and it really creates the emotions you're going through...the nervousness, fear, worry, etc...I felt all that before going to the hospital...especially since I had no clue what they were going to do to me...anyways, great work. Hope you heal quckly...and they have good things to help fade scars these days...

xxx

I really liked this..it was very, persay, interesting. Not much to say on this really, though yet again I do prefer rhyming. It was a bit complicated to understand, but I actually think I got it..:)

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