I liked that.... its cool.. good write n great rthymin scheme... well done xxx

Alright alright I take back what I said to you aight IM SORRY I guess I just felt like being negative I'm usually not that much of a b**** so yeah

Ummm thats not exactly funny and its sick in many friggin ways but its your mind and im just reading it :P tough HA. GET OVER IT. GOOD GIRLS CAN TURN EVIL WHEN U MESS WITH THEIR MEN YOU EVER THINK OF THAT lol well neither did this one bitly I beat up lol but anyways other wise its a purdy good poem

Alot of people thought this poem was wrong and messed up. I am not like this poem. Girls out there dont take it to the heart. I am one of the good girls and their is a second part to this that I am going to write I've been working on it. But there are girls out there like that. It's sad but I had to write about it so I can write part two. Good girls comeback. So dont get offended, I just wrote it I dont live it.

Hey im a bit like dat but i dont go all da way i aint a a s l u t i just like a guy who has a girl

Nice poem
and i am one of the good girls tooo :P
nice poem
its great
keep up the goos work