Lots of emotions, and many people can relate to it, it's an awsome peom

"I fell so empty inside
by my side is where they should be"

so many people feel like that i know i have been there more then once and had friends who were never there. i guess when you really need some one your true friends are there. great poem good subject keep it up your good 5.5

I really liked that...really related to it. the feeling of emptiness and everything. you're friends are probably there..you just need to reach out. well i hope you're ok..take care x x x

It was okay, but I don't know. I didn't really like it. I didn't hate it though, don't get me wrong.. I just didn't really like t. Sorry... Also, thank you for putting a comment on my work. I appreciate it much.

Very good and real, i like it! awesome job, keep it up