I loved the first verse. The whole poem is like the pessimists version of love. But guess what hunnie, it's not always like this. Love can be true, and you will find true love baby, just keep hanging on and don't give up. :-). Great write, makes you think and is definitely very powerful. |
by Natalie84
I'd say bitter sweet. What a dog he is/would be....Sad that that's the story of many! At first I was going to say you should have kept going but I think you ended it very well...nicely done Coonay! BUCKO! What's with them alligators. |