Trying to be Perfect

Well,there was too much use of the words "to", and "where"....which kind of made the poem lose it's value.

To let our love again ring?

I think I know what you were doing with this line,although I am not sure it works...I am thinking that you might need either the word "once" between love and again-accompanied with a comma...or some ellipsis dots.

Taller then the stars

instead of taller, I would use higher.

you need to change this stanza...starting of with "because" really throws it off, and the flow is jumbled...

Because last night
I re-fell in love with you
You remembered me
And I was who you once knew

Wow amazing poem.... it brings back so many memories for me..... i totally give you 5/5..... i thought everything you wrote fight right into what the poem was going after.... totally amazing job..... xoxo

Very good, but some of the lines need more fiddling with. 4/5

And btw the end is nice... it's a nice and simple ending... but sum normal sentances need to be a "lil tiny" but the same... i think you can even make a song out of it if you had a Chorus

OMG nice poem... but nobodies perfect... ok skip this bla bla bla

Now sum useful feedback

It was writen from the heart but as Lisa said you should try and make sentences about the same lenght... it gives it more rythem and makes it easier to read ;)

(i hope you think this is "good" feedback) :P