I really like this poem and i have one kindof like it called love hurts if you are interested |
by katie!
Powerful poem, well done, I liked the form you used to write it and the way you did not restrict yourself in rhyme, It is annoying that you had to put it in profanity, but it is still a good poem and I can tell its supposed to be in sadness, I liked the way you desribed the emotions and the outcomes of what would happen, good work, I liked these lines the most |
This is really good so simple yet so powerful goood job 5/5 |
by Sarah Ann
Very emotional, and vivid poem. Loved it |
Wow great poem |
by ReBecca
I liked this it flowed real well. but you should never stay in a relationship with a man who abuses you. |
by wendy
I like your writing very well done |
by the middle
So sad! ... but i know what you're talking about with the line |