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by Mŀ©ЙЄÅÅЄ Aug 21, 2005 category : Love, romance / first love
I love him with all my heart, i sure do hope it won't tear apart, he makes me laugh, and shows me the right path, that i must take, if i don't want to feel fake, he makes me feel so happy, he makes me so sappy, i don't know how he does it, but he takes me from my depression pit.*Michelle*
by ElegantlyWasted
I like the content in this poem - Though it does seem a tad rehersed if you get what i mean, the rhyme seems just a little forced. Regardless, this is a nice write and i am the first to congratulate somebody when they've put their heart into a poem. So well done on that. :D Thanks for the comment, Always appreciated. - Kal.