Blade

by Heather   Aug 21, 2005


As the blade of the razor sharp knife cuts slowely through my heart,I feel that I am going to lose you and you are going to lose me.The pupils in my eyes begin to fade away through the slow passing minutes,I feel I am going to lose you and you are going to lose me.Now my skin is turning pale white and I begin to shake in a sudden earthquake and there are so many things running through my mind,I become scare because,I feel I am going to lose you and your going to lose me.The shaking comes to a hult and my heart goes cold,the last thing that ran through my mind was"I love Him"...Im Dead..I lost you and you lost me

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  • 18 years ago

    by nobody

    Wow this is realli gr8! thanks for my comment!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written again. I loved the ending it was amazing. Defianlty deserves nothing below a 5/5. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written again. I loved the ending it was amazing. Defianlty deserves nothing below a 5/5. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 19 years ago

    by snowboots firefighter

    Awsome poem! keep them up.

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    I love you poem its really deep in though keep writing u should read my poem "my suicide(please read)" its not a good as urs but maybe u could help me fix it up e-mail me sometime
    sxygurl17233@yahoo.com
    Your Friend,
    Em

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