I want to show you something

I know what you mean, sometimes it's hard for me to show somebody else my poetry, because I'm showing more about myself than I'm used to.

Good poem!

XoXo
Gaby

Eh it was alright, not the best. im sure you could find more rhyming words and such, even though you used the second "explore" at the very end it sorta made the poem lose its flow.

Ahh your wonderful....definatly going on jamie's favorites....i love the way you rhyme everything so nicley and it all flows really well and i know this feeling exactly...well i mean i know the feeling that must have been felt before this poem lol ive never shown anyone i actually know but amazing job!!

I love this poem. it expresses how you feel in short words. :)

Sharing all of that with one person can be very difficult. I wrote for a while before I would show ANYONE. Sharing within this site was easy because no one knew me but sharing with friends and family was very hard for me. There were mny poems that I had that I thought people would think were "weird" and I was afraid of what they'd think of me. It's wonderful though to be able to email a new poem to my mother at work or to be able to just hand my book to someone and say go ahead and read them. It's one of the best feelings in the world! So nicely put! I love this line - "Before I give you my life to explore" Awesome write!!