Awww i'm so sorry you feel like that, i feel really bad for you.. I hope everything turns out alright, but your a great poet, and this poem had a good flow to it and was great, 5/5

Aww girl..i am here for you..im here if you need to talk huni..just im me if ya nee dto talk.

nice poem darling
5/5

-angel-

Oi and what happened to me? lol! I'm ur friend hun - now throw that blade away and listen to me. Ur not going anywhere 4 a long time - u got that? Anyways i did as u requested on my website ok? Amanda :)

Same, I'm your friend as well, get rid of the blade it isn't worth it, stay and work through everything there are so many people who value your friendship, so let us all help, I'm always here, take care
xxxxxxxxx

Pretty good! the emotion was there so it was very good and the flow was awesome, 5/5!

I liked it and like Miss understood,im sory you feel like that.Well done!

Great poem! your not alone... my life is pretty screwed up at the moment and that blade looks pretty inviting.
well done on the poem.. it was very nively written =)

*jackie*

I understand how you feel hun, every bit of what your feeling right now, I feel too. Don't ask how, I just know. But be strong hun. Btw I really like the title

xox

oh and if you need someone to talk to, i'm here for you hun, just mail me

Awesome poem =D

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

Hey, i'll be your friend, you can email anytime, you can yell at me if you want! as long as it helps you out....i know how you feel, and it's not a fun place to be....if you have yahoo you can im me...my sn is xxlostxmyxangelxx or justaloserlikeu i also have AIM, that sn is LetsHugSomeTrees and if you don't have either of those, just pm me....hope you're alright....keep your head up *hugs*

-brittnay- ((5/5))

p.s. i love the poem, it's amazing....keep it up...

O hun I hope you are okay, It was really good. Any poem is good if your feelings are well expressed

Hey I know what your going thru and I'm sorry that your life sucks right now.but if you ever need to talk you can email me, I'll listen. anyways keep your head up, hugs-hayley

I found this poem pretty darn good...I don't know what you're talking about. And you need not apologize for expressing yourself. By all means, let it out. Let it all out. Writing is a release...I hope you can turn to it or something else when times are rough...release through writing your lovely poetry.

I don't want this to sound like an empty offer, but I, too, am here if you want someone to listen or talk...if you need someone to understand...I'm here.

"I watch my wrists as they bleed
knowing that I am going to die
the cuts I have made are deep
and they hurts but I won't cry....." ='(

*they hurt

I especially like the opening... very nice flow... I can relate to some of it (the 2nd stanza)...not the blade part...I hope things start looking up for you...remember, a better day will come. Don't give up. You're tired? Get some rest. Things will get better eventually. Take care, dear.

And I hope the alone feeling leaves you soon as well. You know there at least always people on this site here for you.

xxx

I love your poetry

Omg this is really good! i really like the last verse thing. 5/5

If that isnt one of ur best i look forward to reading the rest! Nice poem

You are a great girl, don't ever forget that, and we are all your friends, you will heal slowly, and until then, instead of waiting for people to make you happy, try putting a smile on their.

For your information,
You have put a smile :) on my face.
Thanks for writing such a great poem.
Hope to see more from you.

Dont say its not of your best....your putting yourself down......rmmber the best things come from your heart not from the mind...:D

Its great..! i hope you feel better..! if you ever need a friend...im always here! ^^