WOW! Very powerful hunnie! I loved it!

Much Love
~*hAiLy*~

Very good....keep it up...xox 5-5
hind

A really good poem. it had depth. really great work. 5/5 xxx

I like that. It had a sudden stop but it definitely worked for this piece. It's really quite short but gets the idea and point across clearly. I thought at first it would be over doing it but it was good...I liked it very much...

Wow!.

loved it! was a geat poem keep up the hard work!

Jacs
xxx

Oh my god. i been there. like that right place! *hugs*
find someone who helps, someone bf-y. or just a friend.

Lv a. x

I'm really feeling your poem i can make it a song or something god really those are some questianable things

I really like this poem!!
Well written... nice work!
take care, xoxoxo

Very nice poem, short but to the point. The best part of the poem, in my opinion, are the last two lines of the first stanza,
"Because something just simply faded
While you wished that it would last "
Simply beautifully put, I feel like that all the time, but could never really find the words to say it. Wonderful, 5/5

Kalika

I like it. It works well by having little explanation. Just powerful emotion. Good work
Sarahx

I wish there was an escape, but there isn't...great work with the poem....

xxx

Wow, great rhyming in this poem. I wish it were longer because it is GREAT! good job!

Amazing poem...really catchy rhymes...haha...nice work!