Aww i'm so sorry if you really feel that way, I know how it is to be betrayed by friends or have them hurt you, it doesn't feel good, but I think that you put true emotion into this poem and it had a nice flow, it is a really good poem and i can't believe no one has left a comment on it yet, my favorite part is "i hold my pain at the base
putting on my old fake face", truely a great poem and keep up the good work, by the way thanks alot for the lovely comment on my poem, i appreciate it alot, 5/5 and keep on writing,

Gr8 poem the flow was amazing and the word went so well. keep uo the good work and hey i know you dont know me but if you ever need some one to talk to. feel free to email me. 5.5

That poem was great. I'm really sorry thats what you feel. But with such emotion you are able to create a master piece. Nicely done ol' Pal.

-Jennifer.

P.S. Thanks for commenting on my poem. I really appreciated it. :)

Very nice poem. The flow was cool. Nice job.
~FotF

That was so good...i know how you feel. i've lost so many of my best friends.
i had just submitted that poem btw..and htanks for the comment!!!
check out some of my other ones?!?!take care x x x

That was so good...i know how you feel. i've lost so many of my best friends.
i had just submitted that poem btw..and htanks for the comment!!!
check out some of my other ones?!?!take care x x x

Ah double post sorry!!!

I love that poem!!!