Wow, Fighter this is beautiful. Your amazingly talented...Keep up the great work:)

Puresilence

Wow this is amazing hun (no surprise there!) you have amazing talent! take care xox

This is amazing. I love all your poems they have great meaning and depth behind them. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

That was brilliant.
you're really talented.
keep writing your wonderful poems.
thanks for commenting on mine.
much love,
marjan

Think i get it, your pain....made you stronger? anywayz it was a wicked poem, very unique.

love mark xxx

Thank you guys soooo much!!! your comments mean the world.

by the way, the poem is about creating a wall around yourself. protecting yourself from the world around you, protecting yourself from love and pain, so that you can't "feel" anymore. it's also about creating a wall to distance yourself from others. and once you start to break that shield, you feel weak and "naked"... anyways, thanks so much for your comments :D
-xXx-

Oooo, I love metaphoric poems
lol
5/5

-steve