I loved it. The flow is amazing and the wording is dark and full of meaning. Very nicely written 5/5 none to less. Stay strong and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Wow
this poem is amazing
u kept me engrossed so deeply
the flow was rele good too..
5/5
if u have the time check out my poem and let me know what u think??
k keep writting!
take cares
& smile always

Amazing. I absolutly love this. Wonderfully written.

I Loved How You Used Metaphorical Statments To Create Creative Imagery...I Liked It 5/5
xoxo-Nikki-xoxo
I Voted On More Than One Of Your Love Poems But My Computer Wouldn't Let Me Comment...Their Were All Worth The 5.0s

I really really liked this poem...you did a really good job on it...cant wait to read the rest.........oh and if you want, msg or email me sometime funky_munky062000 email is brittni@solite.us

The harshnesses of life. Things get better, everything happens for a reason. Whatever doesn't kill you makes you stronger. You should be the strongest girl in the world. Keep it up. Beautiful work.

If you could also read my newest piece, "To good to be true"

Tell me what you think!