...I think your lieing about your a rookie in sex.. lol.. but whatever, nice poem..

Great poem i think you know a lil more then wht you want ppl think....
i loved it keep it up 5/5

Amazing poem, for what it's talking about, sweet and hot :)

I JUSS WANNA SAY THAT IF I HAVE MISLEAD DISAPPOINTED OR DISGUSTED & etc. ANYONE WITH THIS POEM IM SORRY. I GOT AN EMAIL FROM SOME 1 NAMED SYDNEY AND THEY SAID THAT I SHUD WAIT A LIL LONGER B4 I DECIDE TO TELL THE WORLD THAT I WANNA BE A HO. BUT IT WAS OBVIOUS THAT THAT PERSON ONLY READ THIS ONE PARTICULAR POEM BCUZ THIS IS NOT WAT IM ABOUT. AS I SAID, I JUSS WANTED TO TRY MY WRITING TALENTS IN A DIFFERENT CATAGORY AND I DID. AND I AM A VIRGIN I HAVE NO EXPERIENCE IN THE SEX WORLD BUT I AM A TEASE AND I DO HAVE AN IMAGINATION AND I DO KNOW A THING OR TWO ABOUT SEX & YES I AM YUNG. I GUESS I DIDN\'T SEE HOW SERIOUS IT WAS ABOUT A 15 (YES 15) YEAR OLD GIRL WRITTING A POEM ABOUT SEX. BUT THATS WHAT I DO,I WRITE AND I WRITE ABOUT WAT I WANNA WRITE ABOUT SO IF YOU ENJOY THIS POEM THANX & IF YOU THINK IT\'S ASHAME FUK U AND HAVE A NICE DAY!

~SWEETS

Damn u came up wit that and u like 15 damn i wonder how u would be when u really do it that poem was great u write good

I am agree with some of the comments, but I believe u girl, completely. and your virginity is not any of people's business here, i think. poem is very cool, i will save it and then read it again and again till i memorize it. really very exciting and inspiring -at least for me.

Eugh don't listen to what that girl emailed you! Its fine to try out your talents in any topic of poetry! I'd suggest fixing the spelling up a bit. Nice job otherwise. :)

Gurl do not worry about dem hatin lames they juss hatin!!make all dese haters ya motivators

Damn look at u being all freaky n shi*

Hey girl i agree on what you said up thier people need to learn that some of these things are just little writtings and if they cant see that then they are really stupid