This Is My Last GoodBye

by ♥ briTiany ♥   Aug 22, 2005


This is my last hello
And my final goodbye
and UNLIKE other break ups
I'm going to tell you why
When you got upset at me
It really broke my heart
and we fought all the time
whether we were together or apart
We fussed all the time
and lived far away
and it was always the wrong words
no matter what we would say
You said because I used to cut
I had problems and I wasn't right
Do you know I replayed those words
in my head and cried every night?
I guess we just were not "fate"
and things are better left this way
And so with the final words
I have 4 things left to say
I loved you, an don't take this hard
please understand, an don't you cry
This is my last hello
And my final goodbye

Kinda long but please comment on this poem and I promise I will comment on atleast 2 of yours back. Please this is true also. Thanks

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  • 19 years ago

    by sarah

    You did a good job on this poem. i know of a similar situation and saw how it really effected people