by wendy Aug 22, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
Thirteen years and full of hope |
by Andrea
Great poem! in your poems you use great choice of words. |
by XxTeArSxX17
Amazing poem nice flow you good keep up the amzing work 5.5 |
This was good as well!! the flow was awesome, and it was better then your other, the rhyming every 2 lines seems to really work for you, keep it up! 5/5 |
Aww thats so sweet...I'm guessing it's about your son or daughter. those are great wishes...and this is a cute poem. |