Cut that bit deeper

by nobody   Aug 22, 2005


I sit, curled at the end of my bed
from the corner of my deathly black eye
i can see the blade that once said
cut, watch it bleed, you wont cry

well, i cut once, sat on my bed
i cut again, deeper this time
with the gloomy blade that once said
ill keep cutting deeper, it will be fine

i will keep cutting deeper, and leave you now
dont worry, i wont feel a sting
you will carry on, be fine, somehow
i just want you to know one thing

seeing you with her, kissing
brought me to this all time low
made me end it, no one missing
me or my life, specially you, no.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    "Nobody"*it feels rude to call you that yu know:P* Im waiting for new poems and none have come:P Im hoping to here from you soon hun :D

    One of your loving readers
    Jenn

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachele

    I like this one a lot. thanks for the comment on mine!

  • 19 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Again great poem, the emotions truly show. but remember hes not worth it. Your a talented person.

    Jennx0x0x

  • 19 years ago

    by Rachel

    I love the figurative language, this is really good. thanks for the comment

  • 19 years ago

    by *Friends Are Stars*

    This is a really good write, i can relate loads xxx