Thats hot

Lol very good I senced the emotion very clearly..^_^ very good job keep up the good work

:-0 wow...this is a great poem...I love it, please, keep up the good work, I'm your number one fan (lol)...love the way you write your poems...Nice!

I think your poem is very sensual. Kinda like i'm there. Good job. Thanks for the input.

Good poem.

*Blood Shot Eyes*