Ooo, yayy i'm first to comment! this is a wonderful poem, i love how u started every stanza, and kept to your point. great work, keep it up, n if u ever find a chance stop by my poems and chekcout my mew one "an eternity of lament" kk, ttyl~xxx
stray

Beautiful poem...I love how it all works together, especially the first and last lines in each stanza... The Unrequited one does it again...bravo :)

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