My Overnight smile:(

by Bredada   Aug 22, 2005


I cant take it no more
If i had one last wish itd be to go back to our very first kiss
I miss how you hugged me
Im tired of only havin you in my dreams, cuz thats nothing but living a lie over night
all i think about is you
cuz all i want is you
true love is between 2 therefor there shouldnt be no pain
Dats what ifeel real emotional pain
this feelings are so uneal
The one i wish would seal
N realease the pain within me
cuz to me love aint in me without you
and without you the only thing in me is the wonderful memories
that lead to pain causing falling tears
INSIDE THIS FAKE SMILE OF MINE!

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  • 18 years ago

    by oldthings

    Great poem, its written very well and you can really feel alot of emotion from it.. thanks for sharing. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Megadrive

    Awesome! I love the way this is written! And its meaning, maybe some commas and Periods... (I know I said that in all of them) but they do make a difference, Other then that it was great! good Job!:D

    ~Megan~

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