GoODBYe

by SEAN   Aug 22, 2005



My mind will bleed leaving the hurt obvious and clear
infecting my thoughts with pessimism and fear

watching in the distance ad-mist the tears and decay
i see you laughing as my love gently slips away

so content with your final demise
i wish i shared your empathy for the ending of your life

so cold now overwhelmed with apathy
cut off from everybody and all forms of sympathy

why must you pass at such a beautiful time
was it someones will to destroy me inside

you are the girl the pleasant thorn that sticks in my mind
and as it twists and burns i think of you every night

till the time i leave my body dead
i hope that you wait for me my sweet beautiful marquess

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  • 18 years ago

    by SPC Ecklund

    Awesome poem! very well expressed

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Me

    Hey I like it... I don't get how u got the name but I like it!!!! Thanks for the comment... I'm not that good.... it's just emotion..

  • 18 years ago

    by MiaFairy

    Very good! I love this poem u wrote =)

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥Leah♥

    So sad........ i really like the way you write. i can't exactly tell you what is different about it , but it is. all your stuff is. it's so great. honestly. keep up the good work. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by blue eyed brat

    That is a great poem. feel free to write me if you would like too. keep up the gud work. i gave you a 5.0..