It was wonderfull..it'll do just fine...i loved it! 5/5!

Wow so dark and mysterous in a way. I loved it. very well put, and I dont usually fall for dark poems, but this one kept hooked the whole way through.

Amazing...and oh so dark...really makes one think....keep writing! your good

Absoutly amazing work on this one ..really dark and deep..5/5

Interesting...I like this darker poem of yours... great flow, well done.

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Nice poem! Keep it up!

I really enjoyed it. It was scary in a way. I always feel as though that Satan is trying to get me. Great poem. Stop by and read some of my poems and comment please.