Well if you don't feel the poem is done to what makes you happy then the only thing that i can seem to think of is what maybe her friends think of this change she is going through. but i think this is a great poem one of your better ones, i'll come back to it later and see if i think the same thing and maybe then give you more suggestions if you wish.

~Jacklyn

I like it just the way it is... but if you add more it will sound just as good... but it's great =D

Stay Strong ^_^

*..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX