by *NiCoLe* Aug 23, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The night was horrible, dark and sad |
by .:LORI:.
OH WOW. that was really good. ive been trying to rigth a poem about the same idea as this.. and i kinda did. but it didnt turn out how i wanted. so now that i read yours.. i think im gonna try again.. cuz that really touched me.. since ive lost someone becasue of drinking and driving.. so yeah. that was amazing and really good. congratulations! |
by Torn4Ever
Omgosh your so good. you no that poem really makes me think. its ture that could've been me or it could've been you. think before you drive. |
Awesome nicole! i wrote 2 of them bout what jsut happened... very sad, but ppl do stupid things and they pay the consequences... 5/5 |