4/4. I like ur poem. Please check out some of mine!!!

Wow. Very nice ariana. you remind me of another poet that was on this site once. she was just so full of raw talent at a young age, it was just unfortuante she never came back. i hope you stay with us :)
-A

The message is powerful and it reminds me of a scene in the movie 6 sence. good job, you have better but this one is still good and creative.

~Jacklyn