First time ever, that a poem has made me cry so much as this one did....The best poem I have ever read, honestly!!!! Something every one out there can relate to and me too.....I often want to end my life, almost every day and you know I have tried a few times, but yesterday I REALLY thought about death and stuff like that and it made me cry, cause I realized that I'm so scared.....I try to end something I only get once in a life time!!! And you are so right, it takes a strong person to live, giving up is too easy and though I know that, I sometimes feels so weak, that giving up is the only way out!!!! It's like every time I feel fine, I once again get depressed....Do you know what I mean??? |
by B4BY BLU3 X
WOOOOW! That was F|U|C|K|I|N|G brilliant! Loved it, well done x x |
by GoodMorning
I got all teary eyed *sniff sniff*....that was an amazing poem, you are a brilliant writer! keep up the amazing work....i love this poem so much....take care *hugs* |
Wow..i needed to hear that..thnx ur awesum! |
by ZOMGEMO
Amazing poem... loved the positive additute |
by mistake
Well done, anotheer exalent poem i thought it was great and i'm sure from the comments other people did to. you've made another great one i'm sure many people can and will relate to. well done amy keep it up xoxoxox. |
by Virginia
VERY well done. You're very talented. Nice message being conveyed. I hope everyone gets a chance to read this. |
by Chelsi
Great job!! You have talent..and courage to let people come to you w/their problems!! I respect that!! Keep writing!! 5/5 |
Thanks but it's really hard to stay strong when the only people that are your friends, the only ones that undrstand are the ones that you don't even know (you know like I know you people but not in person) And the people that surround me are the ones that are telling em to die... And when you get told to die eventually your brain trys to make up a reason for why they say that... And I'm sorry to say my reason is because i don't deserve to live... I suck!!!!! Yah, that's pretty much it. Please don't take this in offence. I love your poem it's just... there's more issues 4 me. |
by erely
That was a very inspirational poem,,, with lots of insight....great writing |
by chicaaf
Amazing job |
by stlzhunii420
I really like your poem it trully means lot |
Hey this is the first actual poem that makes me think of how many ppl actually are out there that would care... your amazing at writing poems and keep up the good work |
I love this poem!! It sounds a lot like me, I always try to help people up when they're down. Just remember angel, There's more than one of you! Don't try to take it upon yourself to help everyone, save some for me! When you need to talk to someone, I'm here! |
This is a really good poem. It made me cry and your right! I've felt like that I suometimes still do. |
Omg that poem was so great it made me cry. it really touched my heart. u r a very good writer. im gonna copy that down and read it everytime i have one of those moments where i find my self in the bathroom about to make a mistake. it was really thoughtfull of u to write a poem for everyone. |
Beautiful poem. |
by Just Lisa
Hey! Wow, I loved this poem! I can't tell you how much I can relate to this poem! Good job! Hey, if you get the chance, take a look at some of my poems and comment and vote cuz it would mean the world to me! Aweosme poem though . . . 5/5 for sure . . . keep it up! |
Great poem. thanks for being the kind of person who thinks of others..you dont get that alot.. |
by nobody
I love it. it made me cry soooooo much. i like the bit at the end. it made me feel loved |