by Lu Aug 23, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
As I wipe the tears off of your face |
by Kaylee
At first I was going to not read this one but I did and it was pretty good. Got more emotional towards the ending then the start of it. The last line was pretty good too. |
by Jacklyn
Amazing poem. at first it didn't quite capture me but near the end i was fully captured by this poem. it brought tears to my eyes. it's just filled with such beautiful and sweet understanding emotions while facing death. wonderful job~ |
Wow! Holy crap that was amazing! It was so emotional and expressed such a huge bond of love and kindness and caring. You wrote that extremely well! |
by just a poet
Wow, so sad, brought a tear to my eyes. why can't you grow old with him though? |
by Amber
Awww.. that was so cute. i loved it. thanks for teh comment on my poem- it meant a lot. take care. |